Peer feedback – Emily – One of the
strengths of your work is that you have focused a lot on the connotations of
the magazine, and this is great to show you have a good understanding of
representation. You have also written quite a lot for the language section,
which is great. For time management you could try and finish all the magazine
covers today, so you can focus on the double page spread and contents page. As
for presentation, it’s good that you have used an image of the magazine on
every slide as this helps the readers to keep relating back to the magazine.
Danielle feedback:
From what you have done you have done a
good piece of work. However you could have written more so you could dedicate
some much more needed time to your work as you do have a good standard coming
along from reading what you have, however there isn’t enough writing there and
if you could write more in the way that you are doing that would be great. I your
language analysis is also really good and reading through it you can tell you
really understand what is going on, think improvements could be writing more
and working better with your time, as timing is very important. But despite
that you have done well what you do have and if you carry on like that you will
have conducted a good LIIAR analysis.
I agree that I need to
work better in my time after completing my language slide I understand more now
what to write, at first I didn’t know what to write but after getting positive
feedback on what I’ve done is right I know I’m along the right lines.
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